It takes two to tango, and all that

“Is he mad?”

“Yes. He’s in love.”

– Robin Hood 

 For someone who has never actually been in love with anyone, I tend to write about love a lot. It’s something that fascinates me, and being a healthy eighteen-year-old girl, I think a dash of romance adds a lot to a story. However, no two characters love the same. I did a post awhile back on two different literary couples of mine that talked a little bit about this, but today I want to talk about how different characters love.

Love does things to people. It makes you want to be your best self around the person you love. You want to be as attractive as possible to them, you want to be there for them, you want to be with them constantly. You do things you would never do otherwise, you think about them, and you would do anything for them. Needless to say, this is a very complicated thing to write about and, having read more books than I can count, it’s frequently mishandled.

There is no such thing as insta-love. Insta-lust, maybe. But true, lasting, heartfelt love does not happen the first moment you lay eyes on someone. There’s no ‘ZING! I’M IN LOVE NOW!’ It’s a process, not a shot of caffeine. (Now, I’m actually not against love stories where character A sees character B and instantly knows something’s up and they have to meet them. I find them adorable). And every person has a different way of showing their love for someone else. Just look at Jane Austen’s novels. From Pride and Prejudice to Northanger Abbey, every one of her couples was different. (It’s a blog post on love. Did you really think I wouldn’t mention Jane?)

For some people, romance is candlelit dinners, soft music, and wine. (I personally don’t find this romantic, but a lot of people do.) For others, it’s holding hands while taking walks, running through the rain, and watching the stars at night. (This is my idea of romantic. My ideal proposal is at night, lying on the grass, watching the stars – a meteor shower would be a bonus.) For some it’s going to exotic places, mountain-climbing and doing other wacky things (I don’t personally know anyone who does this, for the record).

So every couple is different. I know several couples very well. My oldest sisters are married, my brother is engaged and of course, there are my parents. They’re all very different, and it’s fun to watch, really. I stayed up very late last night, unable to sleep, and read ‘Dreamland’ by Sarah Dessen. I’d heard that author’s name sung to high heavens with praise for so long that awhile back, I bought a book of hers. I liked it. She captured the quirky dynamics of a real couple. They weren’t cardboard. So I read her now and then – Dreamland was extremely good (My main problem with Sarah’s novels is the language. Every character is different, so some won’t swear at all and others will. Also, they aren’t for younger readers as sometimes more…hem, intimate relations are implied. Think Nicholas Sparks for teenagers). If you’re older and want to know how to deal with couples that are completely different, then I recommend her books. 

 But a failing I notice among a lot of novel writers is that their couples will all show signs of similarity. Or the couples have no growth at all whatsoever. Or there is so much miscommunication that I want to throw the book across the room. I’m not a perfect couple-writer, but I think I’ve noticed a lot of mistakes that other writers (*cough*StephanyMeyer*cough) make with their couples, and it’s helped me steer clear of them.

Usually when I begin a book, I have a vague idea of where the couple will end up. They may be together, or they may not. They may find someone else, they may have an adorable relationship or a rocky one or maybe both. Whatever it is, keep every couple’s differences in mind and make them all different and interesting.

Some people show love with tenderness. They’re the sort to surprise their girl with roses, or their man with their favorite food. Some people show it with being protective (this is usually a male tendency, though). Some people fight and tease each other as a sign of affection.

In Unforget, Moon falls for Cayne long before he even notices her (or knows she’s older than fifteen). She shows it by worrying about him constantly (a valid concern, since he’s always getting himself into dangerous situations and being hurt, even if he comes out on top) and giving him ‘tough love.’ Once he starts to care for Moon (though honestly I don’t know if he falls in love with her or not; he hasn’t made up his mind) he shows it by protecting her and putting up with her sharp tongue.  They’re frequently furious at each other, but Cayne’s tender side begins to show more and more often the more he cares for Moon. (I love these two.)

What will you do with your couple? Whatever it is, make your couple one that will be remembered by the reader long after they finish the book.


21 thoughts on “It takes two to tango, and all that

  1. Interesting that you’d cover this topic, as I kept this thing in mind during the writing of Fly Away Home. Mr. Barnett and Callie have a taunting-teasing relationship, yet there is always a sense that Mr. Barnett is doing it all because he loves Callie. His banter has a warmth to it that Callie’s might not have….at first. 🙂 Callie finds herself falling for him against her will…but only because she’s sworn to love no man. He falls for her rather early on, I think, but no one is exactly sure whether it’s love or simply a very kind man’s impulses toward a lonely girl…

  2. I love this! ESPECIALLY because…WHAT! I’m doing nano this year! (woot woot! imhannahnicole — add me!) BUT. I seem to be missing a love story between Eristor and Sienna in my inbox…that was promised to me forty years ago…well…not really, but same thing…AHEM. 😉

  3. Strange…I have ‘must enjoy watching meteor showers’ on the bucket list for a future boyfriend. XD
    I really enjoy hearing your opinion on romance. Since I am *writing* a romance, it’s extremely helpful. Some of what you said really struck a chord with me, especially because my couple seems to be the moody type, and they can’t decide if they want to be stuck like glue to each other at the end, or kind-of hanging in between. *sigh* I’m really bad at romance. >.<

    • I’m glad you enjoy it; everybody has different opinions. It’s fun to hear them =D Ah, yes, your couple…I love them, no matter what they do =D (And you aren’t bad at it, silly! ^.^)

  4. Interesting points…I shall have keep these in mind of I get around to writing more than a few words of a story. X-(
    Your “mistakes other writers make” thing reminds me of something – I’ll send it to you in a bit.

  5. …then sometimes there’s that couple that really, truly hates each other, despite a rather grudging sort of respect, and since neither of them has really been taught how to show affection (and partly because any affection they do have is against social stigma and an entrenched caste system), they just sort of scream at each other and constantly get on each other’s nerves, trying to forget the other person really isn’t that bad.

    And then there’s that.
    You know.

  6. Ah. Love stories. I’ve always approached them with caution, both in reading other peoples’ books and in my own stories. I’m not into the surface-y fluff relationships that fill many plots. (One of the few “romance” novels I actually like is Pride and Prejudice, because it’s about strong-willed, deep characters who act realistically.)

    This year for NaNo, I’m tentatively allowing my characters Phoenix and Merrily to have that tension as part of the plot, but it isn’t a huge, sweeping romance. In fact, they don’t end up ‘together.’ The story is more about sacrificial love, in a friendship context. (This may develop into more of a love story if I decide to make it a series, but so far, only one book is planned.) 😀

  7. This is so awesome, and true. I’ve always been very tentative about romance. I’m not exactly the… ahem… mushy kind of person. Though I can enjoy reading a well-done romance *cough*EVA&MIR*cough* I can never quite strike the right balance myself. Definitely food for thought. 😀

  8. Well, Finley and Tallon have this sort of struggle in the first book. He doesn’t think love is a good idea for guardians, and tries to tell her so, but they end up falling for each other anyway. After that, it’s a sort of we-hold-each-other-up, keep-each-other-strong relationship, with a couple tiny mushy bits, like laying her head on his shoulder when she’s thinking or him setting his chin on her shoulder. They don’t really swap endearment terms or anything like that. Plus, their romance isn’t the main part of the story–it just adds to it.

    However, Tallon’s twin brother, Zane, is pretty much opposite. He’s not *supposed* to be in love with Annie, but he pretty much says “I don’t care!” and openly hugs her and kisses her and teases her. He’s the holds-hands-constantly, kiss-on-the-cheek, piggy-back-ride kind of guy. And Annie adores it. But again, the romance isn’t the main part. It just adds tension and makes things a bit complicated.

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